“point of view” in Write Away by Elizabeth George
Posted by Lew Weinstein on April 15, 2007
· must be clear about point of view in each scene Objective viewpoint · writing is journalistic, like a reporter; provides facts, but not thoughts and feelings of characters – tough to carry off well · objective narrative can create an aura of intrigue about a character or a situation – precisely because the reader does not know inner thoughts or feelings, but it also minimizes the reader’s intimacy Omniscient viewpoint. · Must be adept to remain truly omniscient and not just slip in and out of different characters points of view · the narrator knows, sees, hears all · the narrator enters into the mind of every character · the viewpoint of the narrator is not necessarily that of the author · omniscient narrator is a story teller; the reader sinks into the story; the narrator is not confined to the time or place of the individual scene (like a reporter would be) but can provide history about the characters as well as what’s in their hearts and minds Character viewpoints. · Reveal only what the chosen character would see, know, think, feel in each scene in which the character is participating First person. · Stay with one narrator throughout the novel. In that character’s head and none other. Terrific intimacy, authenticity. BUT this one character must be in every scene, which is a challenge to plotting · Shifting first person. Multiple first character viewpoints. Each section or alternating chapters told by a different first person narrator. Challenge: each “I” must be utterly distinct · Shifting third person. NOTE: no viewpoint shift within a scene, unless … · can combine first person with shifting third person (that’s what I did in A Good Conviction) · too many narrators slows down the pace of a novel · narrator can be reliable or a devilishly clever liar, likable or not
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